Sara offered clear and detailed feedback on the submission pages of my middle grade novel, addressing my specific concerns and pinpointing areas requiring attention. Her suggestions resonated, and I was inspired to revise my work. Her approach and expertise are invaluable, and I highly recommend her services.
what I offer you
a love of middle grade fiction and knowledge of new releases
a vision for big-picture improvements and an eye for making every word count
understanding of a great pitch/ logline (my own MG logline made it to the Elite Eight of a cross-genre online March Madness bracket)
I will offer suggestions on how to tighten your query and point out what is missing.
submission pages feedback
I will provide overall feedback on your first 25 pages: pacing, plot points, language, dialogue, etc.
chapter line edits
I will provide line edits on any one of your chapters. For multiple chapters, adjust the price accordingly. Contact me about pricing for full book line edits.
full book developmental feedback
I will provide overall feedback on pacing, plot points, language, dialogue, character development, etc.
I will tell you what I think is working about your first page and what I think isn't working.
FREE: simply email your double-spaced first page to firstname.lastname@example.org
chapter line edits and submission pages feedback will be completed within 10 days
full book developmental feedback will be completed within 60 days
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