middle grade services

Sara offered clear and detailed feedback on the submission pages of my middle grade novel, addressing my specific concerns and pinpointing areas requiring attention. Her suggestions resonated, and I was inspired to revise my work. Her approach and expertise are invaluable, and I highly recommend her services. Rosanna Montanaro

what I offer you

  • a love of middle grade fiction and knowledge of new releases

  • a vision for big-picture improvements and an eye for making every word count

query/synopsis critique

I will offer suggestions on how to tighten your query and point out what is missing.

$40


chapter line edits

I will provide line edits on any one of your chapters. For multiple chapters, adjust the price accordingly. Contact me about pricing for full book line edits.

$50


submission pages feedback

I will provide overall feedback on your first 25 pages: pacing, plot points, language, dialogue, etc.

$100


full book developmental feedback

I will provide overall feedback on pacing, plot points, language, dialogue, character development, etc.

$400

note

  • chapter line edits and submission pages feedback will be completed within 10 days

  • full book developmental feedback will be completed within 60 days

  • payment required in advance (via PayPal, below, or venmo (@SaraLKruger)

  • fill out the form below indicating the services you're interested in

  • email your manuscript as a Word doc to saralkruger@gmail.com