Sara's no-nonsense approach to editing my stories has helped me get unstuck many times. If you need to trim down your word count or help with word choice, she's your girl. Her guiding questions and insights have been an invaluable part of my kidlit writing journey.
Sara goes above and beyond, delivering a critique that is both exceptional and encouraging. She skillfully suggests where to trim and tighten.
Sara offers extensive, straightforward, clear, and on-point reviews. She goes above and beyond, asking questions to encourage the author to deep dive into the story and re-think parts that are troublesome.
Sara offers thoughtful and meticulous manuscript critiques. She has a gift for finding places that don't move the story along. If you're stuck with your story or need help brainstorming ideas, Sara's comments will push you in the right direction.
Sara's story-level edits pointed out holes and discrepancies, and her scene-level edits offered insights on how to improve pacing dialogue, and action. She also provided the encouragement I needed to continue revising. Cristina Raymer
I was starting to feel a bit deflated with my picture books and more and more convincing myself that I'm not a picture book writer. But
hearing Sara read my story
made it come to life.
It was just what I needed to inspire me.
Sara provided a comprehensive critique of my chapter book manuscript with extensive big-picture suggestions and detailed chapter-by-chapter notes. Her positive yet constructive feedback provided clear steps for revisions. She exceeded expectations.
Sara gave detailed feedback on my middle grade fantasy novel, including questions about each chapter and notes about words I overused. She also gave overall feedback on plot points and character arcs. I especially appreciate that she pointed out strong areas, so I could be sure to keep those as I revised.
If you are looking to take your stories to the next level then look no further. Sara's ability to see the big picture, identify issues with the story, and employ her sharp editing skills are stellar.